[Game Chef 2013] French winner needs native English speakers proofreaders...

edited June 2013 in Make Stuff!
Hello ! My game won the 2013 French Game Chef. We translated it in English, but we need native English speakers to tell us if the translation is correct. Could someone read it and tell us where we made mistakes before we put it to layout ? Thank you !

The French version
The translation


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