200 word rpg: "Each Player Brings Something"

This is my first micro-RPG like this: interested in feedback on whether it seems compelling and whether the language conveys that.

I haven't playtested this yet (going to try this weekend) but curious if people think the "bleed" aspect of this is likely to work or be too much for people.

Thanks!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XIa9yxI9_ZlgSpPBS9dym1Joa8Fk4Mzz_ilGgzoFrY4

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  • Added a comment at the end. I like it! Thx for sharing.
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