[World of Darkness Add-on] for [Urban Shadows (AW Hack),] Would love feedback!

edited August 2013 in Story Games
Well, we are getting closer to a finished product for 4 of my WoD Add-on books for Urban Shadows (Apocalypse World hack) and I wanted to give them out to the public to for that last round of feedback. Here is what we are working on:

• Vampire the Masquerade (proofed, play tested, PDFed, just needs a final round of proofing)
o Download: https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9Hhx1yXlz-OWWhqM1FkN1VWbVE/edit?usp=sharing
• Werewolf the Forsaken (proofed, play tested, PDFed, just needs a final round of proofing)
o Download: https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9Hhx1yXlz-OdEJuTVNBcXZ5SWM/edit?usp=sharing
• Mage the Awakening (proofed, play tested, PDFed, just needs a final round of proofing)
o Download: https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9Hhx1yXlz-Oc19fNzUxVl9OZXc/edit?usp=sharing
• Hunter the Vigil (proofed, play tested, PDFed, just needs a final round of proofing)
o Download: https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9Hhx1yXlz-ONUp5RHNhR3N4ZFk/edit?usp=sharing
• Orpheus (based on Spectre) (proofed, play tested)
• Slasher (First round of proofing almost down)
• Demon the Fallen (Being worked on)
• Changeling the Lost (Being worked on)

Enjoy the PDF's and I would love to hear your feedback, which you can leave in this thread or comment on the working document here, that we keep all of the documents on.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vAfokBManOfs96xyvhPB2q6P1lR3PrN1OGNmjkLoqk8/edit

To play this game, you will need Urban Shadows by Andrew Medeiros here:
http://www.story-games.com/forums/discussion/17890/urban-shadows-an-urban-fantasy-rpg-powered-by-the-apocalypse/p1

Note: Urban Shadows has moved to letter sized formatting, but I have decided to keep these add-ons at legal size formatting ..... for now.

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I am a huge fan of Urban Shadows by Andrew Medeiros. The second I finished reading through US a few months ago, I felt that I had finally found the great starting point for having the WoD fix that I wanted in an AW gaming mechanic.

A few weeks ago, I began writing an Add-On for US adding many of the WoD clans, tribes, orders and creeds. Along the way, I have picked up a great team of Anton Dominic, John Layton, and Steve Moore in writing material for FOUR WoD books, currently we have the Vamp (Vampire the Masquerade,) the Wizard (Mage the Awakening,) the Wolf (Werewolf the Forsaken,) and the Hunter (Hunter the Vigil.)

This is our first draft write up, as you will see not quite complete, but I would love feedback from both WoD fans, US, fans and AW fans. Any advice would be great, there is a lot of material here. We are starting play test on it next week and will keep you informed of how it goes.

If any of you want to playtest this as well, that would be awesome and would love feedback, videos, ect...

Any feedback is noteworthy. You think a clan is represented? Tell us! You don't like a move? Tell us! You have a great idea for a move? Tell us!

Comments

  • First draft of Werewolf is done, now just need feedback!

    Mage should be done by this afternoon, with Vampire by end of week and Hunter closely after that.
  • edited April 2013
    Hunter section is complete and ready for feedback. John Layton, the who put it together, did some amazing work with it with some very unique moves.

    I was never a fan of Hunter in the WoD series, buy I am dying to play one here!
  • Designs have been finished for Werewolf the Forsaken and Vampire the Masquerade. Final revisions of Mage the Awakening should be completed by Friday with the layout being done this weekend.

    I am waiting for all 5 books to be finished to release a single document.

    I may make some small revisions to Vampire the Masquerade to add in Caitiff clans as well as open it up just a bit more for cross clan/sect play.
  • New PDF's in original post for download for Vampire, Hunter, Werewolf and Mage.
  • I have updates coming out to all 4 of these next week with a few balancing changes, Werewolf is getting additional Auspices.
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