This is my thread for my contribution in the Game Chef challenge. It is named Edge City.
I will post snippets from the game here, and questions about it, and are very grateful for any and all comments you make. Praise, questions and critical comments are all helpful to me in this process.
The initial text reads like this:
Edge City is a cityscape on the edge of the world. The literal edge. The world is flat, and on the western side of it lies The Great Desert. This desert stretches from the far interior of the world, to the edge, where Edge City lies, like a dark scratch of stone and glass in the bleak sands.
Edgers are highly sensible people, urban and sophisticated. They walk asphalted streets, talk modern, and drink caffe-latte mixed by baristas. So this game is basically about YOU; a modern human being, placed in a fantasy on the edge of a flat world.
You are scientists, and your great task is to explore The Edge, the very real precipice on the western side of Edge City. The game is focused on the journey you will take part in, as the great crane takes you all down through the layers of the world ...
- So; what do you think? Does it sound interesting?