UPDATE March 2014 -- Two drafts later, the game is now Nine Powers.
My wife and I could not find an RPG designed for only two people (GM and one PC). So I wrote one. Then we decided I should change it to a diceless game, now named Dvreem
Since my wife and I play it often, I am primarily asking for feedback about presentation. Is it readable? Organized? Is the web page easily navigable? Do the examples work well? Etc.
But if you want do play it, please let me know what you think!
Even constructive criticism about only one aspect of the game would be appreciated. The rules
are short and simple. Before
the rules are long sections, full of examples, containing nearly all I know about how to play an RPG. After the rules is an incomplete fantasy setting
I am still busy typing about.(I was going to wait longer to share the game here, but then it made sense to mention it in this discussion. So now I might as well introduce it more formally.)
Thank you for any constructive feedback! Enjoy!